This is our first draft of our thriller intro project, 'Missing'. After showing different types of audiences, from professionals to students we have constructed a list of improvements and changes that will be made to the project.
- There is a space of nothing (black screen), up to 9 seconds in that needs cutting.
- The 'bearded man productions' sequence needs cutting shorter after the animation has taken place,
- All 3 newspaper articles have been filmed in the same way (a pan from left to right), many of the viewers agreed that it would be better if we changed the shot type throughout these clips.
- Further content needs to be included, for example the suspect circling locations on a map, this would help make the audience think more, and add enigma
- More job titles (credits) need to be added.
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